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By the time Pinkie had regained consciousness she'd all but forgotten her trip through the labyrinth.
The fighting, the balloon garden, the elements..all just foggy shapes in the back of her mind.
She fully expected to open her eyes and see her cozy room in Sugarcube Corner, her little body wrapped safe and warm in the blanket Mrs. Cake had so generously given her...
Generously...
Rarity...

The elements!
Pinkies eyes shot open.
She wasn't in her bed, she wasn't in Sugarcube Corner and she most certainly wasn't curled up in a warm blanket...
Instead she found herself high above Equestria, looking up into the endless blue of the sky while below her the sound of pouring rain and a bizarre popping sound echoed throughout the land.
Memories flooded the Party Pony's mind.
The Labyrinth, Discord, her friends laughing-
...at her...
Her ears dropped immediately, her eyes squeezing shut tightly.
"N-no I...how did-?"
"Ah, you're awake my dear!" Discord's voice sounded so happy and full've optimism as he slithered out've the cloud to greet her. "I was worried our little trip had tired you out for the day but it seems you're much too high energy for that."
Pinkie stared at him, eyebrow cocked in confusion until the memory of her little 'deal' caught up to the others.
"How..am I standing on clouds?" Pinkie so spoke strangely slow even she seemed to notice how odd it made things feel...well, odder.
Discord merely chuckled though.
"Those aren't just clouds Pinkie Pie. They're candy. Anypony can walk on candy, right?"
"Yeah, but-"
"Shh!" A clawed finger pressed itself against Pinkie's lips, halting any further argument on her part. "I made these clouds for you. I could make a whole palace of them for you, if you'd like. Would you like a cup of hot cocoa, my dear?" At that, the dragonokis snapped his claws, a mug appearing inches above them and dropping into his grip.
"...Maybeee?" The pony replied, eyeing the cup and it's holder with a mix of curiosity and suspicion. She may have been a bit naive, but Granny Pie didn't raise no foal!
...Er, fool.
Discord continued to smile and chuckle to himself as he dipped the cup into the cloud floor, pulling it back full've dripping chocolate and topped with a ball of cotton candy.
"Ooo, that looks delicio-Waaaitaminute." Pinkie caught herself and took a step backwards. "I see what you're doin'!"
"Do you now?" Discord purred back, placing the mug on a coffee table that appeared to also be made out've candy. "I was under the impression I was making hot cocoa for my beloved. Though do tell me, what is it you think I'm doing?"
"You're trying to make me act all goofy and happy so you can laugh at me!" Her eyes narrowed, her front hooves digging into the fluffy flooring. "You're just like them!"
The trickster merely rolled his eyes, smile growing wider.
"Heh, dear, sweet Pinkie Pie. I assure you..." He ran a soft paw down her face. "I would never, ever, laugh at you."
She stared. Slowly losing her evil eye as Discord stroked her cheek.
"But...my friends..."
"Your friends are boring!" He announced, turning away with a paw on his hip and his griffin-like hand making twirling motions in the air. "So neat and orderly, no sense of adventure and certainly no sense of nonsense! Not like you, Pinkie. You're wonderful!"
Pinkie Pie couldn't help but smile at that, whether 'that' was the compliment or the insult towards her former 'friends' she didn't quite know.
"You are a proper source of Chaos!" Discord continued, his pawed arm joining his clawed one in it's erratic and excited movements. "You know how to have fun and enjoy the sheer...madness of it all! I could never laugh at you, because I truly, truly-" He suddenly grabbed her front hooves, holding them a literal breath away from his so-called 'evil fang. "-admire you."
A blink and a blank look was all he got in return.
"I...seem to have confused you...well, that is my job after all-"
"I'm not confused, silly!" Pinkie corrected, her voice suddenly became chipper and more upbeat than it'd been all day. "You want to be my friend...like, a real friend, right?"
"I'd like to be more than just that, Pinkie Pie. With someone like you by my side...we could finally return Equestria to what it once was...or even more than what it once was! We'll make it an entire world dedicated to us having fun!" Discord's smile widened as his grip on Pinkie's hooves tightened.
The blank look disappeared and she smiled back.
Someponies would say the bitterness in the back of her mind clouded her judgement, that that spell in the labyrinth changed her somehow and made her turn against her friends, against the Princesses...but deep down, it had nothing to do with spells or the elements or the princesses or even her friends' supposed, mocking laughter.
In that moment it was only her and somepony who truly, truly understood her. What she liked, how she acted. Somepony who would never make fun of her, call her crazy, think she was just being 'silly' when she was really busy doing stuff for 'em!
Somepony...who, as it turned out, wasn't even a pony at all.
"Weeeell...that does sound like it'd be quite a party! We have to pick up gummy first though. He LOVES parties!"
The paired smiled at each other, suddenly laughing in unison.
Discord tossed his new 'partner' in the air and catching her only to take off into the clouds towards Ponyville, happy to fetch whatever a 'Gummy' might be.
There would be a big, ol' storm of Chaos tonight alright.
The likes of which nopony had ever seen.

Sequel to 'A More Than Friendly Offer.
^^; I'm sure it's got a few typos and such here and there, writing at 7 am wasn't really my best idea. XD;
<3 But I hope you all like it! I had a ball writing it and I hope you guys can at least enjoy it for it's cheesiness. ^^
PART ONE: 'A More Than Friendly Offer.'
PART TWO: You're there! :iconexcitedpinkielaplz:
PART THREE: 'Friendship in Chaos'
PART FOUR: 'Reunited Doesn't Feel So Good'
PART FIVE: 'Consequences of Chaos'
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ILikeCupcakez123 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bouncing Pinkie Pie Bouncing Pinkie Pie Bouncing Pinkie Pie Bouncing Pinkie Pie Bouncing Pinkie Pie Bouncing Pinkie Pie Bouncing Pinkie Pie Bouncing Pinkie Pie Bouncing Pinkie Pie 
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Zabchan Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
oh, and it's spelled "draconequus" not dragonokis'. from the latin for 'dragon horse'
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Zabchan Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
hmm, seems a bit fast for discord to be calling her his 'beloved', although i though the '....admire you' moment was very well done, like he was racking his brain for a good word to express his unsorted new feelings for her and didnt want to over-commit. perhaps 'dearest' would be better instead of beloved, as he does call ponies 'dearest' in the show. (namely fluttershy) come to think of it, i've never heard him call anyone 'darling'...maybe pinkie alone could have that title ;3
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Brokenhoof Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
"Admire you" And with that I started reading it in Q's voice
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Sweet! 8D Glad that years of falling asleep to Q as a child have paid off. :XD:
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redphienix Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh the lulz ;P

I'm enjoyin' this bit xD
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:! Glad to hear it. ^^
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GDeNofa Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011
I just had to read this chap again. I love Discord's enthusiasm with Pinkie... cause the spirit of chaos finally found his soul mate. :)
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: Thank you!
Happy Discord is incredibly fun to write. ^^
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MissKillerSparkles Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Again, this is awesome XD
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:w00t: Thank you!
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Roronoa-Forte Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
I'm looking for a sequel to this now. You'd best just make it a series of blurbs about these two. It's what your adoring fans want. :D

And by adoring fans I mean me. I can't speak for everybody else, but...I think they speak for themselves. :nod:
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Woot! I can has fans! 8D *Brohoof*
I'm not sure if I'll be making a sequel to this simply because I don't feel I'm a good enough writer to keep up an entire AU storyline for too long without becoming dissatisfied with it. ^^;
Def gonna write more DisPie though and might do a minor continuation of these two with a sort've 'clopclopclop' element too it. Nothing to 'dirty' but I haven't written anything suggestive in a while and it'd be pretty dang challenging to do that with Discord and the ever-excitable Pinkie Pie. :P
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Roronoa-Forte Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
I could go either way, but I definitely want to see these two fall more in love with each other. :meow:
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That I can happily provide! 8D
DisPie lovin' is my bread 'n butter! Or...chocolate rain and cotton candy clouds, as it were. ^u^
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Roronoa-Forte Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
Yay. :dummy:
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Predwolf Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I like it
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ Glad to hear it!
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Predwolf Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I think seeing some sort of sequel would be cool, and I really always thought those characters fit together
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tamama2 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Lovin' this.


So much.



Just wanted to let ya know. :meow:
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfluttershyyayplz: Thank you!
I'm glad to hear it! ^^
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tamama2 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Sure! ^w^

You need to write more DiscoPie! :icongwahplz: I demand it, sir!
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:salute: AYE AYE MISS! :iconpinkiepieplz:
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tamama2 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Alright! :la:
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shining-armor7 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
let's see where this goes shell we
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, unfortunately, this'll probably be the last in this little story line. Minus a little 'bedroom' chapter I might add. ;P
Might write more DisPie eventually though. ^^
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shining-armor7 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
sad bit happy
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Ixtaek Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
After watching the episode all I can say is "WHY?! WHY DIDN'T IT END LIKE THIS?!"

Makes me soooo happy. You're wonderful. If I could make it rain chocolate I'd do it for you. :)
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, d'aww. <3 Yeah, poor Discord is all statuey again. XD But hey, he broke out once before!
<3 I'm so glad you liked it! It was super fun to work on and I'm glad so many people got a kick out've it! ^^
I would love some chocolate rain! :iconpinkiepielaplz:
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Ixtaek Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
*sends chocolate milk rain*

My friend actually tried it. She said it wasn't what she expected but not bad at all ;)
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cheriestar Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
Love for this. Much love.

And I think Gummy will take his new home well XD Just nomming on the candy clouds and such.
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
<3 Meep! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it. ^^
XD I HAD to include Gummy, I'm sure they'll be the happiest family in Equestria (even if it is by default, haha)!
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nightifflove Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
YES.
<3
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:!
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Silvolf Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Hehe I enjoyed it! I didn't see many typos. I love it cos it's believable.
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Yays! <3 Glad you liked it Silv!
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sodomitor Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awww so cute! SO cute!

You made a point here - her friends do not understand her. For them she just 'silly random Pinkie being Pinkie', they don't feel like her. They do not see beauty of chaos she represents...
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankies! I'm glad you like it! :3
I had to include it, especially after rewatching the first episode of Season 2 and the'Parasprite' episode in the same day. xD; I felt so bad for everyone involved and poor Pinkie just not getting how her friends couldn't understand what she was doing! Who doesn't want a friend and/or lover who can understand a lot of what you like and how you think, even when others don't?
It seemed the perfect fuel for my DisPie oven. :XD:
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sodomitor Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yes)) He totally understands her! I mean, come on, if it rains chocolate rain WHY they ruined awesomness of it and grounded the clouds? Foolish Twilight and her friends))
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smallflame Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awwww smexy!
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:w00t: Thank you!
Glad ya like eet! 8D
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smallflame Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
heh yea.IS 7:25 AM HERE VERY CLOSE TO NEXT EPI WE!!!
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconpinkieswiggingoutplz: SO EXCITED! :iconexcitedpinkielaplz:
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smallflame Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HEHEHE...
LOOK AT WHAT FRIEND IS MAKING ME!
[link] HEH YEA!
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DonnyFate Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
<3 D'aww, too cute! c:
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smallflame Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HEheh yea its Dis and My oc...a happy wicked coupling spreading chaos all over world dawwwwwwww...
I so hope they have in more epis not just this one..I say this could last one with him! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Well if so, his loyal Minions[aka his fans lol] Have to write whole AU/FANDOM universe..duh lol..
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